Monday, 25 June 2018

The Disaster.

Learning Goals.
To find the key information and to summarise the key facts, summarise the story in your own words and to not retell the story in your own words.

What I liked the most:
I liked to find the key words and rewrite them in your own words. It was interesting to find new stories to read and summarise them and to learn new things each time I read the book.

What I found hard/frustrating:
I found it too hard to not retain the story and to summarise the story. It was hard to keep in the same tents and not to switch from the past and present.

What I Can Do Next Time/ difference:

Next time I will keep my writing in these tents and not keep switching from past and present. I well put the important information .

2 comments:

  1. Kia ora, I am parker________ from Makauri School.
    I really liked your profile writing
    I learnt that I like that you Use the key word in Whiting

    Maybe you could You can read and look at the spelling words in your book and if you can memorize it you can put it in your writing

    If you would like to see my learning visit my blog http://makauriparkera.blogspot.com/

    Mā te wā makauri

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  2. Thank you for your great suggestions. I well be using them in my next peace of writing.
    Ngā mihi maioha Aleasha

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